Savannah: My juicy panda poem!

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

In a zoo

was a lovable panda

looking so shy as it sits in a tree

the panda climbed the tree

as slow as a sloth

the panda smiled and waved goodbye !

Anonymous said...: Great poem Savannah. I really like the line with the simile - do you know which line that is?; 12 March 2013 at 21:30
Paige said...: Hi savannah i like you poem about the panda keep writen more poems and everyone will think u r a star and soon u will be made of gold!!!!!!; 14 March 2013 at 12:19
Mengchun said...: Hello Savannah,

I really like your poem about panda because it made me thought of a picture in my head, I really like your picture of the cute panda.
You got a great choice of picking pictures!
Have you see a real panda before?

Great work!
Mengchun; 14 March 2013 at 12:23
Juanita said...: Good post I wish I could do something as good as yours. I love your poem about panda keep writing I love it.

from Juanita; 14 March 2013 at 12:40
Savannah said...: Thank you all for the comments
And my smile is on line 5 :)

Bye :D; 15 March 2013 at 14:08
Liantre said...: Hi Savannah

I like the photo on the panda he is so cute and keep up the good work.; 21 March 2013 at 12:20
Shantay said...: Hey Savannah,

I like you poem a lot so keep up the cute work.

Shantay; 21 May 2013 at 11:23
Mengchun said...: Hi Savannah

Your panda poem is fantastic!
I wish I could cuddle the panda in your poem.

Mengchun; 21 June 2013 at 12:26

Savannah